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There is no audio for this submission Poetry: Her hands 29-01-2010 - by Linear   (59 words)      The magic of love Her hands Gentle, soft, Bring comfort. Her hands Precise, strong, Bring justice. Her hands Adept, firm, Bring pleasure. In the forest She labours under Amethyst moonlight. Head bowed, eyes closed, Skin peppered with Shadows and light, Her hands weave Raw magic and My oldest dreams. Her glistening form Painted with light, Beckons to me. She smiles, eyes flash. This woman of Air and lightning Drawing me near. Her divine beauty, Enthralls me. Without fear, Leaning closer, We touch. And her hands Tenderly fill My world with colour. Critique/comments welcome Average Score: 8  /  Votes: 1   Printer Friendly Page    Send to a Friend -- NEW -- Social Book Mark This Page Digg del.icio.us Furl Comment posted by Jolen (29-01-2010 12:00) Send Jolen a Private Message Wow, it's been forever since you posted, but I suppose you've been busy with love, and creating this beautiful tribute to it and the object of that love. I'm seriously impressed! When you decide to write a love poem, you kick ass! This is beautiful. love, jolen Reply from Linear Thank you so much, jolen. It has been some time since I've written something that could be posted. And I have indeed been busy with love, the inspiration for this piece. Thank you again for the kind and sweet comment, I am so glad you like this poem, and that you think it kicks romantic poetry ass! Love, D. Comment posted by sunken (29-01-2010 05:33) Send sunken a Private Message I agree with that Ms. Jolen of swollen fame. To be frank, I'm scared shitless no to (-; A really impressive piece. Good to see you back. The beagle named Bernard - he say 'woof'. As you can see, I'm still crap at commenting. It doesn't mean I don't know what I like though. And this I likes. Well done fella. s u n k e n Reply from Linear Ms. jolen is rarely wrong , and it is wise to agree with her, ;-) Thank you so much for the top bark, I always appreciate the communist beagle approval :-D And I love your comment, Sunken. Comment posted by jay12 (29-01-2010 06:33) Send jay12 a Private Message Hey Linear, this is a superb bit of love poetry. The last 4 stanzas really build the mood to a.... er climax... no pun intended. I'll raise a glass later to my missus for filling my world with colour. Great work. Jay. rated 8 Reply from Linear Thank you very much Jay! The end was tweaked a lot during editing... no pun intended either... I'm glad you like how it turned out. Love is a wonderful thing, and capturing even a part of that in word form was a struggle! Comment posted by stormwolf (29-01-2010 07:50) Send stormwolf a Private Message She sounds quite a gal! There is a lot of tenderness here..lovely. Alison x Reply from Linear She is an amazing gal, thank you, Alison :-D And thank you for the sweet comment, tender and fulfilling is what I wanted to capture. Please Login or register to post comments

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